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I have a writing problem, sort of.

So when it comes to conceptualizing stories, I'm all for that. I can generate ideas, plot summaries, and rough character descriptions very easily. The problem is that when it comes to actually writing that into a story, I end up getting bored. Which I know is just part of the writing process, but I'm trying to come up with some ways to mitigate that. Let's call this hypothetical set of mitigation strategies "meta-writing techniques"

So one problem I was having was that I had no idea how to end a story. I'd write and write and then the ending would feel unsatisfactory, and I would be too burned out to put effort into rewriting the ending. To mitigate that, I try to visualize the story on a higher level, and use less specific and detailed writing to get the gist of it down, then going back and adding foreshadowing in this description. I call this meta-writing technique "architecting" after the Gardeners and Architects dichotomy.

Another problem I had was that I was concerned my main character was too powerful (As I like to call it, Rey syndrome after The Force Awakens: Too powerful to be interesting). The meta-writing technique I came up with is one I like to call "Balance of Power" (I know, not creative) where in the core cast of characters, spread skills and abilities around. Does the group need to pick a lock, hack a door, and then get away in a car chase? Don't give all that to one character, spread the skills around so that the group works as a powerful team. This is heavily inspired by my experiences with tabletop RPGs where the different character classes allow us to get through the situation by leveraging different players.

The problem I have now is that I have a plot summary you could reasonably find on a Wikipedia page for the story, but I have trouble getting motivated to actually bring it from the outline stage.

So, using the examples I provided, any techniques come to mind to get motivated to go beyond the outline stage? XD I realize that motivation is a fickle thing, and everyone does it a little differently. One idea I've had is letting the outline sit for a while (Maybe a few months without touching or thinking about it), and then coming back to it with a fresh mind. Another idea is to gradually expand the outline with more and more detail until it becomes a write-by-numbers project of "This needs to happen in this chapter, go do that." I dunno. I'm also partly writing at you to try and give myself ideas. :lol:
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Chozon1 wrote: Sat Feb 11, 2017 8:47 am Copper jewelry?
Why not? Of course, I'm not really into jewelry....
Deepfreeze32 wrote: So one problem I was having was that I had no idea how to end a story. I'd write and write and then the ending would feel unsatisfactory, ...
There's a simple solution for that. It's called the "sequel hook." ;) If you've left a thread or two loose and your readers are demanding to know what happened, use that as a motivator for the second book. Or the third, or the fourth....
Deepfreeze32 wrote: Another problem I had was that I was concerned my main character was too powerful (As I like to call it, Rey syndrome after The Force Awakens: Too powerful to be interesting). The meta-writing technique I came up with is one I like to call "Balance of Power" (I know, not creative) where in the core cast of characters, spread skills and abilities around. Does the group need to pick a lock, hack a door, and then get away in a car chase? Don't give all that to one character, spread the skills around so that the group works as a powerful team. This is heavily inspired by my experiences with tabletop RPGs where the different character classes allow us to get through the situation by leveraging different players.
That's a great approach! The only flaw is that you need to make sure that these different characters have different personalities. If they all come off as carbon copies of each other, this attempt at diversity will fall flat. Fortunately, you seem to be pretty good at wrangling different personality types into your characters, so this shouldn't be an issue for you.
Deepfreeze32 wrote: The problem I have now is that I have a plot summary you could reasonably find on a Wikipedia page for the story, but I have trouble getting motivated to actually bring it from the outline stage.

So, using the examples I provided, any techniques come to mind to get motivated to go beyond the outline stage? XD I realize that motivation is a fickle thing, and everyone does it a little differently. One idea I've had is letting the outline sit for a while (Maybe a few months without touching or thinking about it), and then coming back to it with a fresh mind. Another idea is to gradually expand the outline with more and more detail until it becomes a write-by-numbers project of "This needs to happen in this chapter, go do that." I dunno. I'm also partly writing at you to try and give myself ideas. :lol:
Since you have an outline, that's a great place to start. Your readers may (probably) read your book in chronological order, but you certainly don't have to write it in that fashion! Look at that outline as also a checklist. Divide it up into chapters. When you get bit by the writing bug, look over your outline and see what chapters strike your fancy. If you haven't written that chapter yet, go ahead and do it. If you have written it, edit or rewrite it. Be flexible enough to rearrange your chapters, too. Keep this process up and you'll eventually have a complete draft of your novel!
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Chozon1 wrote: Thu Feb 16, 2017 8:48 am Ultimate nemesis fight?
You mean two nemeses duking it out for supremacy? That can indeed be something to behold.

For example, I remember one episode of the rebooted Doctor Who, where the cybermen confronted the daleks. The encounter between the two classic enemies of the Doctor was something to behold - there even was some hilarious smack talk between the two before the guns started blazing!
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I think I actually remember that episode.

Daleks vs. 40K space marines?
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Chozon1 wrote: Fri Feb 17, 2017 9:58 am Daleks vs. 40K space marines?
I don't know. I don't really know much about the 40K game, other than it uses a lot of minis and costs more than I have.

... oh, and apparently orcs are sentient mushrooms who are so stupid that reality has to warp itself in order to have them make sense. Which makes orcs inherently awesome, obviously.
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Don't forget their thick Cockney accents. I love 40K orks...if they were a hair less horrifyingly brutal, I'd probably prefer them to Spess Mahrines. There technology only works because they believe it does, and...I wish that were true in real life. XD

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Chozon1 wrote: Sat Feb 18, 2017 8:48 am Don't forget their thick Cockney accents.
I didn't remember that because I didn't know that in the first place. That makes them even funnier!
Chozon1 wrote: Sat Feb 18, 2017 8:48 am Meatloaf?
He's OK. He hasn't come up with any new music for quite some time, though. ;)

If you're referring to the food, it can be pretty good - especially with ketchup!
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Oh yeah. I'm not sure if it's cannon, but seems like every time I see orks in action they've got a british accent. And stuff like 'eavy' armor. Could just be because GW is based in Britain though.

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Chozon1 wrote: Wed Feb 22, 2017 8:32 am Jamaican jerk flavorings?
I ... don't know. I've never eaten a Jamaican jerk. Or... any Jamaican, really.... Have you? :shock:
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Of course not. O_o

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Chozon1 wrote: Thu Feb 23, 2017 10:12 am Gaming conventions?
I've never been to one. But then again, I'd have to drive hundreds of miles to get to the nearest one.... When I think about how many people will attend, though, it makes me think that I'd rather enjoy my time at home.

I've been getting more introverted as I get older....
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Yeah...but I want to go to some.

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If they've been battered and deep fried, they are so good! Not good for you, but incredibly tasty. :)
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Hey, good for the soul is still good for you. If in a metaphysical way?

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