A quick poem/passage

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A quick poem/passage

Postby Jackhammer » Wed Nov 30, 2011 8:46 am

I quickly wrote this:

We all have done evil
Every man and woman is tainted
We are all rushing into destruction
But the First and the Last stepped out of His throne room
And walked amongst us sinners
He came to save and cleanse us
But we greeted Him with hostility
And made Him die a criminal’s death
He did not take vengeance
Instead He gave mercy
On the third day
He rose from His grave
And showed the world that He is greater than the equalizer
He said that whoever accepts Him
Will be cleansed by His blood
Even though we do not deserve it
He shows us mercy
When we showed Him none

I don't think that one can call this a poem because some egg heads might say "Well, it doesn't rhyme so it's not a poem"
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Re: A quick poem/passage

Postby ccgr » Wed Nov 30, 2011 10:55 am

Whatever it is, its good! :)

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Re: A quick poem/passage

Postby Chozon1 » Thu Dec 01, 2011 2:08 am

Double that homie. Excellent.

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Re: A quick poem/passage

Postby sharonmercy37 » Sat Jun 16, 2012 3:06 pm

:D I like it lots!

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