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Re: MantaRay

Postby Chozon1 » Fri Jul 06, 2012 3:32 am

Nice addition. ^_^ What was the secretary wearing?

Also, you'll probably want to censor out 'hell' for the forums.
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Re: MantaRay

Postby Eagle Eyes » Fri Jul 06, 2012 7:33 am

LOL sorry, bout that.

I thought it best to keep it so everyone can feel it.

Wouldn't be the same without it though....

And.... i couldn't think of something to replace it with.

LOLOLOLOLOL very good question.... I don't know.

What does plane Jane clothes look like?

I'll let your mind take over there. :mrgreen:
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Re: MantaRay

Postby Chozon1 » Mon Jul 09, 2012 2:54 am

Hmm...I understand the predicament. Why not leave it but for sake of forum rules, just throw some '**' over a few of the letters?
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Re: MantaRay

Postby Eagle Eyes » Mon Jul 09, 2012 11:06 am

Ok.

Good idea.
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Re: MantaRay

Postby Eagle Eyes » Mon Jul 09, 2012 11:09 am

Go have a look and tell me if you approve :wink:
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Re: MantaRay

Postby Chozon1 » Thu Jul 12, 2012 4:06 am

'Preciate that. :D
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Re: MantaRay

Postby Eagle Eyes » Thu Jul 12, 2012 5:53 am

Hi guys and girls.

There will not be any updates anymore.

For there may be a couple of outsiders (non members) that may want to steal my story.

Who knows, maybe, one day, you may just see my book on a shelf somewhere.

However, if you really like the story and want to be kept updated on it's progress, you are welcome to email me

@ [email protected] (Members only).

Just say MantaRay as the subject and tell me who you are and i'll gladly keep you updated.

I love your support and that is partly what motivates me to make it an awesome book. I would never have made it this far without you guys! Thanx!!

Pray for me please so i can carry on with it.

With love

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Re: MantaRay

Postby ccgr » Thu Jul 12, 2012 2:23 pm

Sibel: "That’s not what I am crying about, I think Ray wants to break up with me".
Sybil started sobbing all over again.

You might want to make sure the name is spelled consistently

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Re: MantaRay

Postby Eagle Eyes » Fri Jul 13, 2012 8:57 am

Sorry i missed that one.

My mom started spelling Sibel's name like that.

Thanx for showing me.
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